Six Sentence Sunday

It’s another Six and I’m working on a short story that deals with last contact/end of the world times. 3500 words. A lot shorter than I’m used to doing for my shorts.

When joseph sat down and turned on the tv, there was a woman standing with a microphone.

“…and the self proclaimed prophet is standing and speaking of things as Elder gods coming to wipe out mankind.”

Jospeh put his hands over his son’s ears. “How about you go play with Sophie, okay? I don’t think there is anything interesting on tv.” He gave a weak smile.

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11 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Alix Cameron Says:

    Great atmosphere achieved with his response. Nice work!

  2. I love this! Creepy and scary and lots of tension. You’re going to complete it in 3500 words? Wow! Great six. I wanna see what happens next! 😀

  3. It’s hard to write a good short story! You’re off to a great start.

  4. It sounds like he knows more than he’s saying. Great six, Nellie. 🙂

  5. Great set-up! I want to read more. . . .

  6. ooh! sounds like a good story!

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